Digital artist (2D and 3D) and Worldbuilder! She/They
Age 28
England
Joined on 4/20/17
GrapheneKid 2024-05-30 10:20:32
Eh not bad. "Heart dropping, jaw stopping" gave me a chuckle. The sentence mixing could use some work though and the intro was a bit long. Keep practicing!
raptorbricks 2024-05-30 10:20:32
thanks! I still got a lot to work on, but glad people are enjoying it!
GrapheneKid
Eh not bad. "Heart dropping, jaw stopping" gave me a chuckle. The sentence mixing could use some work though and the intro was a bit long. Keep practicing!
raptorbricks
thanks! I still got a lot to work on, but glad people are enjoying it!